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I feel your pain Bova, I can't climb trees to save my life either.
This page was the most difficult to draw, I did try some things I usually don't go for though.
The difficulties include:
1.) Angle of the Tree
2.) Bleed dancing
3.) Water effects
3.) Bleed's arm in the bottom panel.
I wanted to try an odd composition connection by having the branch bleed is hanging off, line up with Bleed's out stretched leg in the next panel. it didn't come out as OBVIOUS as I originally intended, but I like it none the less.
Requesting critique even though I'm too poor on money and care to get a official critique requested button.
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Bleed + Bova (c) Ruckntrigger
I feel your pain Bova, I can't climb trees to save my life either.
This page was the most difficult to draw, I did try some things I usually don't go for though.
The difficulties include:
1.) Angle of the Tree
2.) Bleed dancing
3.) Water effects
3.) Bleed's arm in the bottom panel.
I wanted to try an odd composition connection by having the branch bleed is hanging off, line up with Bleed's out stretched leg in the next panel. it didn't come out as OBVIOUS as I originally intended, but I like it none the less.
Requesting critique even though I'm too poor on money and care to get a official critique requested button.
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Bleed + Bova (c) Ruckntrigger
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Don't feel too bad, I'm too poor to afford the subscription necessary to -submit- critiques. But damn if I won't just go around and do it anyways.
So far, this page is the one where I happen to notice a seemingly wonky thing. As it turns out, it's not any of the four things you seemed to find difficult, though. I thought you did a very good job with the perspective of the first panel, and while simple, the look on Bova's face is, to me, somewhere between disgruntled and disappointed. I did notice her right arm was a bit lighter, after the fact.
Bova's mouth in the second panel is what caught my eye, repeatedly. I'm not sure if it was meant to be a perpective that I just didn't get, but her mouth seems too high and off to her left (the right) a bit. Every time I looked at this page as a whole, my gaze was drawn to that odd part. I think it's in part because my mind kind of tried to warp her facial structure to match it, and it sort of made her look rather misshapen.
Bleed's dancing, and the water effects I both thought you did pretty well, and her arm in the bottom panel, too. I like how she's embarrassed to get a flower from Bova. Such a nice touching moment.
So far, this page is the one where I happen to notice a seemingly wonky thing. As it turns out, it's not any of the four things you seemed to find difficult, though. I thought you did a very good job with the perspective of the first panel, and while simple, the look on Bova's face is, to me, somewhere between disgruntled and disappointed. I did notice her right arm was a bit lighter, after the fact.
Bova's mouth in the second panel is what caught my eye, repeatedly. I'm not sure if it was meant to be a perpective that I just didn't get, but her mouth seems too high and off to her left (the right) a bit. Every time I looked at this page as a whole, my gaze was drawn to that odd part. I think it's in part because my mind kind of tried to warp her facial structure to match it, and it sort of made her look rather misshapen.
Bleed's dancing, and the water effects I both thought you did pretty well, and her arm in the bottom panel, too. I like how she's embarrassed to get a flower from Bova. Such a nice touching moment.